A Connection To Letters

Today I spoke about how beautiful your name was.
I made people gasp at the sound of how it- could be said.
It was not how I said it,
It was how I implied

Your name. Beautiful through you.
I imagined for others how beautiful your soul was, your family,
your heritage, your relationship with me
with my hint of how you say

Your name. Is a clear indication of how much I love.
That two words can make gasps
because I said you say it better than me
because I said I love

your name.

-I never consider myself a great poetry writer so tell me whatcha think-please be honest, otherwise I might write more-

ain't no sunshine

Wrote this to Thales on Facebook:
"Life has moments that are scripted. Sitting, lying, leaning on the bed, words are, and then the awkward pause.... Where the sentiments of love should be. but are carelessly forgotten for the indulgences of making it. Anyway, on this bed, during this pause, Paul Simon says exactly what he, she, they cannot. "I just can't say I love you" Or some lyric close to that shit. This pause, this lyric, create a sensation that affects both movie goers and individuals alike. And once again the importance of the I-tunes play list becomes undisputed."